A Critique of One "Synopsis of a Flood Synopsis".

[gamgee]

In Chapter One, the author has, for some unknown reason, omitted a period.

The portion dealing with Chapter Two, appears to be anger driven, evinced by the misuse of the word "causal".

Chapter Three would have read better if about whom was used, rather than who...about.

[dudeman]

With all these flood threads you'd think its raining everywhere. All we got was a little sun shower. Sure cooled things off around here.

[bowclan]

We have funnel clouds not far off. Im happy with just rain living on high ground.

[gamgee]

I probably should have watered my spinach.

[Smudge]

Dry day here, I finally managed to mow my lawns.

[bowclan]

Dry day here, I finally managed to mow my lawns.

Yeah mowing time is on us too, oh joy.